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RE: Spiraling Love In The Maelstrom Heart

in #poetry7 years ago

Looking for ourselves in the grains of sand, the universe rhythmically launches new knowledge of spring love. We are a spiral of impulse in the coming wave of raising awareness. Raise a kiss on my shoulders, my passion, I am the truth in your eyes.

When GinaBot gave me a notification about this post, I wanted to ignore it and scroll pass because I was very busy. But then, the intro got my attention and I decided to check it out.

This is poetry at its finest yet simple.
look at how each lines is interwoven and flow into each other perfectly.

The imagery is top notch and I like the passion in the writer's voice.

Excellent poem I must say. I'll peruse over it over and over again trying to catch some hidden literary techniques.

Happy Steeming

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Thank you for excellent comment