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in #poetry6 years ago

Free verse is a rhythmic dance with voice and words, so be aware of the sequence of lines and follow along to see how one flows into the other.

It can help to read the poem aloud.

#love #life #poetry


early in the morning


panacea
the smell of your hair

the swirl of our souls
transforming

to be with you
is a kind of heaven

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How do you feel, having read the poem?

Can you picture the scene, and the emotion in these lines?

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What will we do with a drunken sailor?
Early in the morning...
:)))

Haha! Hello sailor :D

Well spotted :)