@clayboyn Damn the first two lines are like heaven. A light into the darkness, where we must go alone.
Truth cannot be revealed for it can only be known.yes yes!! We must follow the bright path always even if you are all alone when no one even supports you and you are on your own.
Wow ... that must have been a challenge ... so this is shape poetry too. Kudos. That is not easy to achieve and have it read so well. Color me impressed:)
I love this so much, I did not want it to end. It's just so good....Thanks @clayboyn, for continuing to create post and art that allows the reader to walk away more enlightened, changed and the way you pack the content it gives one some things to think about
"A light into the darkness, where we must go alone". When we are at crossroads between where we are presently and we are meant to be, the optimum decision lies with interacting with the mind.
It is the journey of every human being to explore himself and choose the path
You always have strong memorable last lines.
I try to always close with impact. :)
Nicely stated! My personal favorite part "resistance leads to getting caught in the undertow" This is AMAZING! Thank You for sharing!
@clayboyn Damn the first two lines are like heaven. A light into the darkness, where we must go alone.
Truth cannot be revealed for it can only be known.yes yes!! We must follow the bright path always even if you are all alone when no one even supports you and you are on your own.
How can you write so well here but get served up in the battleroom? 😁 #thestreets #rapordie #northernstreetsweepers #maplemafia #beavertownbombers #earlshardwearandbicyclerepair
But I'm not a rapper. :P
Love the message and craft represented in this piece. It flows really well. Can I ask how you were able to justify the text in markdown.
I just centered it and and wrote to fit the lines that I wanted. Required changing a few things here and there, but it was done manually.
Wow ... that must have been a challenge ... so this is shape poetry too. Kudos. That is not easy to achieve and have it read so well. Color me impressed:)
I love this so much, I did not want it to end. It's just so good....Thanks @clayboyn, for continuing to create post and art that allows the reader to walk away more enlightened, changed and the way you pack the content it gives one some things to think about
Thanks Ren! Sharing the perspective is all I know. :)
You have used the word "shan't" therefore you will receive all the Cheezits.
Look at that 67!!!!
Thanks cat mama!
*Sigh
A deep emotion put into words. Kudos.."A light into the darkness, where we must go alone". When we are at crossroads between where we are presently and we are meant to be, the optimum decision lies with interacting with the mind.