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RE: 23.08.2018

in #poetry6 years ago

Wow! Great stuff - I especially love these lines:
The waves wait for no one; they come and go as they please.
They leave pieces of themselves behind, then drift away with ease.
I want to leave my imprint, like footprints in the sand.
I want to be the space that connects the ocean and the land.

This is so full of emotion, the tension of moving forward into a new place. And the idea of making someone else's house your home - I get that! It's a timeless and universal theme. Keep posting!!

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