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RE: Attempting new kinds of poetry.
Brilliantly written, you've a great natural rhythm. The scene was set well, the imagery is spectacular, Your word choices are really great at building atmosphere.
My one suggestion would be to save italics for effect, it is harder to follow. I shouldn't judge as my handwritten stuff can be damn near impossible to read, given the option, a regular font is preferable.
All in all though, great poem, thanks for sharing.
Seriously thank you so much, i really appreciate the well written response. Your totally right about the italics, they should be used to help create atmosphere or drive a particular word even harder. This is my first time writing and posting anything online so its all a learning experience. Thanks again for the advice and checking out my work haha.