It is beautiful, well written and visualised.
Only the last line jars...the word "are" does not belong....or so I think, or else, the word "with" should read as "while"...am I wrong?
It is beautiful, well written and visualised.
Only the last line jars...the word "are" does not belong....or so I think, or else, the word "with" should read as "while"...am I wrong?
Arggh ...I hate typo's - you're right. I was debating between 'while ' and 'with' and ended up with a whiff :)