romance poem

in #poerty7 years ago

when you walk into the room my heart sets on fire.
i tell the truth i am no liar.
i will remember you till i grow old.
i value you more than all the worlds gold.
my feelings for you are not new
i would go to hell and back for you
there is no other girl like you.
i feel joy when i look into your
beautiful eyes
my love for you never dies.
there is no other girl who i love more.
of that fact,im sure.
there is nothing i wont do for you.
you are like an angel from above
you are the one i will always love.
you are the girl of my dreams
for you,my heart screams.
seeing your beautiful hair
and your skin so fair.
the heartbreak i have to bear.
when i dont have you here
my eyes are filled with tears.

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I like your style and how you form your sentences. It’s really heart felt. Great job @red.

If you would please take a look at mine and follow as well. https://steemit.com/writing/@cryptoprofessor/you-grow-in-me

thank you.and ill be sure to check it out

Thanks for sharing your heart @red. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Keep it up.

also ive followed you now