Everything about this spoke to things going on in my life on many levels. relationships, life, i even wrote a post yesterday, about "human angels" among other related-to-this things...
I already really like your music, this is a nice side dish.
Ended up going back to some old writing to find something else in particular, and this just sorta jumped out and body got into action posting it here. Cool to hear this feedback and know that half-conscious action turned out to be well-timed and serve at least one person for where they’re (you’re) at now... 😇
No words to explain the exquisite beaty of the lines...already been told by so many steemit greats in comments....music- writing- crypto and now poem. You have masteted everything... 👍Rok the Rockstar👌
Ok first of all this is the longest poem I have ever read.
The magic of humanity, we witness,
as bonds constructed across the globe
deliver us the insight to transcend -
bridges to new perspectives
expanding our minds -
connections at our depths
This kind of reminds me of this platform and how I feel a connection even to people I share different a philosophy from and have never met. Amazing to see how much our spirits connect despite location, philosophical and even cultural differences
Change as our soul collides is somehow inevitable. Spirits are bound to collide and unimaginable things which is beyond our control happens. And even when this are happening challenges also contributes to our perception towards life,teacher turns out to student and student as teachers. I still also believe that with all this mystery of life, things are bound to change, as our soul collides. Thanks for the knowledge.
Colliding souls are souls who are looking for ultimate peace. When the mind, body physically, and the soul are in harmony, peace will come. Peaceful souls do not deny conscience, do not deny the mind, do not harm humans and nature. That is the soul that is close to God. I love the poem @rok-sivante.
I loved reading this lovely crafted post. “Across borders, we are drawn to those whose but none others reflection can show facets of ourself so distant, so familiar, so near...” I can relate to this feeling...unity and diversity fused within and without. I love the soul in this piece <3
Questioning about the purpose of our existence in this world and what makes us really really happy... I think we all need to think about it, and I agree with you, to give all the best for all is the main reasons we are here and what makes us find truly happiness.
( "With challenge, we are presented -
to learn, to grow, to set right...
Teachers emerging as students,
and students as teachers -
friendships blossoming
as the vehicle for our evolution..." ) This is a fragment or verse of your poem that I really like and in my opinion the words or sentences are arranged neatly and deeply. I am sure anyone who reads this verse will inspire his deepest sense of instinct. Thanks for sharing @rok-sivante
In this way, you will be frustrated with Steemit. Add some valuable comments and build a relationship. Enjoy the process and in the process you are going to be rewarded.
Everything about this spoke to things going on in my life on many levels. relationships, life, i even wrote a post yesterday, about "human angels" among other related-to-this things...
I already really like your music, this is a nice side dish.
Awesome.
Ended up going back to some old writing to find something else in particular, and this just sorta jumped out and body got into action posting it here. Cool to hear this feedback and know that half-conscious action turned out to be well-timed and serve at least one person for where they’re (you’re) at now... 😇
No words to explain the exquisite beaty of the lines...already been told by so many steemit greats in comments....music- writing- crypto and now poem. You have masteted everything... 👍Rok the Rockstar👌
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Ok first of all this is the longest poem I have ever read.
This kind of reminds me of this platform and how I feel a connection even to people I share different a philosophy from and have never met. Amazing to see how much our spirits connect despite location, philosophical and even cultural differences
Change as our soul collides is somehow inevitable. Spirits are bound to collide and unimaginable things which is beyond our control happens. And even when this are happening challenges also contributes to our perception towards life,teacher turns out to student and student as teachers. I still also believe that with all this mystery of life, things are bound to change, as our soul collides. Thanks for the knowledge.
Colliding souls are souls who are looking for ultimate peace. When the mind, body physically, and the soul are in harmony, peace will come. Peaceful souls do not deny conscience, do not deny the mind, do not harm humans and nature. That is the soul that is close to God. I love the poem @rok-sivante.
I loved reading this lovely crafted post. “Across borders, we are drawn to those whose but none others reflection can show facets of ourself so distant, so familiar, so near...” I can relate to this feeling...unity and diversity fused within and without. I love the soul in this piece <3
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Amigo, es un hermoso poema, me gusta mucho. I love it, congratulations, uff its pretty poetry.
Greetings from Venezuela
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Questioning about the purpose of our existence in this world and what makes us really really happy... I think we all need to think about it, and I agree with you, to give all the best for all is the main reasons we are here and what makes us find truly happiness.
( "With challenge, we are presented -
to learn, to grow, to set right...
Teachers emerging as students,
and students as teachers -
friendships blossoming
as the vehicle for our evolution..." ) This is a fragment or verse of your poem that I really like and in my opinion the words or sentences are arranged neatly and deeply. I am sure anyone who reads this verse will inspire his deepest sense of instinct. Thanks for sharing @rok-sivante
Great man
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In this way, you will be frustrated with Steemit. Add some valuable comments and build a relationship. Enjoy the process and in the process you are going to be rewarded.