Goodbye - Song
Let us sit down and take a break.
How long have we been together?
It has been hard
All those years
Look at us now
Today is the day
A new episode in our lives
Time to start something new
Don't cry, please don't
I could say you are not abandoned
but...
Well, you know what happens if
Everything ends and it's
Too much
You have seen the papers
Unpaid bills
Calculations and sleepless nights
What do you say?
Speechless
Tired again or in thought?
I listened to your whining
Sobs, barking and moaning
I accepted your mood swings
And you know what?
It's too much
I accepted it for too long.
Your behaviour nerves me
The neighbours complain
It takes something small to make that final call
Did you ever have second thoughts?
About how I feel?
Would you stay if I said I can't stand you?
Sharing a bed with you sucks
You never lay still and
You stink
And because of you
I am always single
Look at the river
Doesn't the water calm your mood?
There's no need to stand up
Don't follow when I leave
This is the final goodbye
Trust me it's better than being left behind
Tied to a tree
I cut the rope and set you free
Sit! Don't follow me.
Goodbye human.
The Song
18.3.
Text: by me
Music: by me with help of suno.com
The picture prompt is provided by @freewritehouse
Weisser-Rabe told me of your lyrics and your Suno trial, so I dared to try it on my own because I regard your lyrics as too well done to be ignored.
How did it go? There's a lot possible including adding the own music but I am not that eager (or is it musical) to try it out.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
A musical Friday!
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Not my music, but the lyrics are great... ;-))
I had not much opportunity to try it out. Stupid Suno started without me and as I finally figured it out there were 2 options left (well, figuring it out is too much said since I have no idea what type of music to pick or what to expect. It's more like Russian roulette).
If I won't forget I might try it again. What type of music you listen to? I can't make a folklore out of this one.
Thanks for stopping by.
Folk inspired symphonic metal could be a good fit ;-)) Thanks in advance!
I sit down after hours, to read. I always find in your literature (oasis to drink) that freshness. That sound, which sweetens the ear, is melody, is art.
Poetry.
https://suno.com/song/2af00811-ffff-4dd5-ac6e-e475f4ae0971?sh=ikHZAkjFBvt3BOAL
Which one of the two you generated you like most? I believe the other one though I hoped as I tried for a more doglike voice. 😁
I couldn't decide and that's why I posted both.
...would be too treacherous.
Instead, I could have thought of a female voice as this could have symbolized the soft soul of the dog.
I thought about a female voice too but then I thought many say male dogs/animals are easier to keep, more gentle.
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This seems to me to be sheer rumour.
https://suno.com/song/b57149c9-5f1b-4292-b3e2-4d126a1b0174?sh=aZMTSpeXKNsMcd5O
Thanks for sharing. I added it to my list 😁
I thought a discussion was going on here but it looks rather quiet. Good enough to listen to the weird song.. weird as in really weird. Do you really listen to this kind of stuff or is it an artist at work?
I like what you put together though but please, wear the headset if you listen. Do the dogs bark along? 👍
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