Confessions (stream of consciousness original poem)
I take naps sometimes
just to escape the world
it feels like a rewind on my life and I like it
my body started craving oblivion
sometimes if I lie still too long it just happens like the relief of rain on a too sunny day
This is my submission for @jessandthesea's poetry contest The prize is to see the poem written on a person, as an artistic collaborative piece. It sounded like a fantastic chance to jumpstart some creativity and experiment a little.
Image is from Pixabay
Poetry is property of Sunravelme
Almost any bad mood is healed with a nap. Loved this poem, Kara, for it's imagery and its immense wisdom ... seriously ... the world needs more naps:)
Yes it does! There's a nap for that, for sure!
:)
Great!
Thank you!
I like naps as “the relief of rain”... I’m a napper, too, to escape and taste oblivion. Sweet dreams
PS - I think you’re missing an I before “lie”.
Happens to me all the time! 4 eyes see better than 2 :)
Nothing like a nice, long nap!
Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight? I wish I could get all the ones back that I fought against as a child....
YESSSS this is beautiful
Thank you!