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RE: OpenMic songwriters Challenge week 7 - The Right Place and/or The Right Time

in #openmic7 years ago

hello basil

what a beautiful piano playing! my father was a pianoplayer also so you just brought me back to fine memories

i am really impressed by the poetry that one find in your lyrics
simple but efficient and so true

the conclusion.... "My life for just one moment/Too perfect to be mine" amazing

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thankyou so much, im happy I brought you some fine memories of your dad! Really glad you liked the song too....it was difficult for me to write, normally I find a lot more lyrics but this had to be a lot simpler than my usual poems, so Im really pleased that you enjoyed it :) Sometimes this challenge pushes us out of our comfort zones and its lovely to receive positive feedback and appreciation! It is definitely helping me to build my confidence x peace and love to you x basil