That sounds really good but it does not qualify for Open Mic unless you follow the rules.

For a fuller explanation of the Open Mic rules read https://steemit.com/openmic/@luzcypher/what-are-the-rules-to-enter-steemit-open-mic-and-why-do-we-have-rules-anyways

If this is not an entry for Open Mic then please do not use the openmic tag as the first tag. Than you.