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RE: Steemit Open Mic Week 97 - (original song) - Things As They Ought To Be

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)

My poetry comes out of me.
The more you resist it the more I see
how rhymes and verse can be
just what I need to get free.

From your egotistical embrace
your original song is just a case
of you always needing your space
without regard to my needs or taste.

I'm sorry if I dare to dream
of the butter and the cream
while you're off posting your life on steem
its always you, know what I mean?

To myself I must be true,
you want to go, that makes me blue
but let me tell you what Imma do
I'm getting over loving you.

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That was beautiful.

Your original song inspired that! Thank you for posting on steem, and keep it up!