BEGINNING OF NOVEL (PREVIEW)
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Rainy, and cold. Street lamps light up the busy streets of London. Here, I stand in the middle of a crowd of everyday people going about their everyday lives. As I look up into the grey skies, it seems that the skies reflect what we are facing. Just a grey, emotionless, and numb society. Nothing special.
What if I told you, I was born in the wrong time period?
What if you told you, I had the wisdom, the knowledge to living better than a just an everyday life?
Think I’m crazy? Well, here’s my story. And here are the lessons I have learned and will share with you.
You see, humans are very interesting life forms but at the same time, they’re highly destructive to themselves and others. This makes humans weary of ourselves and everyone around them. This builds stress, trust issues, and unhealthy relationships if we are not careful. In order to avoid these problems, we have to first reach within ourselves and bring out our best to share with others.
Humans require only the basic of needs. Yet, there are people living in grand housing, or people complain about there not having enough of something. For example, money. People even gossip about each other constantly. And for what?
Attention?
Status?
@virod, it's hard to give an opinion when there isn't much there. I could go into the obvious grammatical errors, but that wouldn't help much. I suggest you post more of what you are doing and let us give an opinion then.