A great post and account.
A pity I didn't find it earlier...

Nice article. I couldn't have put it better. :)

I did a similar structure in my newest song (it's about a week old). I took some more creative freedom as mentioned above.
It's a rock ballad I've been working on for more than 2 years.
I would be more than honored If you'd listen to it and tell me your opinion...
https://dsound.audio/#!/@acedawnmusic/20180322t180611057z-kingdom-of-dawn-by-smodi

Thanks. :)
A great job you're doing. You have got yourself a new follower. ;)