RE: Cambio de imagen extremo para una microhistoria
Hello again :)
Congratulations on completing this task! Your ability to transform a dark story with elements of humor and ambiguity is truly commendable. The metaphors like "stained with blood" and "the end of the world" effectively captured the eerie tone, while the playful twist at the end added a surprising and creative layer.
The shift in tone at the conclusion was intriguing, though it slightly softened the suspense you had masterfully built earlier. Perhaps a more seamless blend of humor and horror could enhance the chilling atmosphere while preserving the story's unique twist.
The star of the show is your reflection part: Your reflection was insightful, showcasing how stepping out of your comfort zone pushed your creativity. Overall, this is an engaging and well-crafted piece that highlights your growth as a storyteller!
A big big hug
¡Holaaa amiga!🤗
Muchísimas gracias por tus palabras motivadoras💚... Viniendo de ti son un honor porque durante este taller he estado conociendo tu pluma y sin duda alguna es admirable.
Escribir historias en microrrelato ha sido un desafío enriquecedor para mí y, aunque no estaba adaptada a todo lo que implica seguir los parámetros de la literatura, he comprendido que este arte nos orienta hacia la excelencia.
¡Mil gracias! Por tu apoyo... Un fuerte abrazo💚
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