Hola marito74
Your version of the story Lope de Aguirre occupies brings that ghostly legend to life, blending reality with myth to create an atmospheric microstory. With vivid descriptions and a compelling narrative, you draw readers into Puerto Fermin’s folklore. The intriguing detail about the statue falling adds a mystical layer, suggesting a force beyond the tangible. I must say: a powerful hook that clearly resonates with your readers.
If you are open to suggestions, I would very humbly say: For a more seamless flow, consider beginning with an imagined scene. This could immediately immerse readers in the mystery and suspense of the story’s setting ;)
Hello, thank you very much for the nice comment, I love that you appreciate those details in my micro narrative; of course I am open to suggestions and I agree that an imaginary scene would give it enhancement, in fact at one point I thought about it but the feeling prevailed; I tell you that my grandfather was a fisherman and told stories like this. I appreciate the suggestion, a big hug, blessings.