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RE: Illegal: a true story of love, revolution and crossing borders [book serialization/ Ch.4]
Well done! pleasing and fluid writing style. Upvoted and resteemed.
Well done! pleasing and fluid writing style. Upvoted and resteemed.
Can you comment on the content as well? Looking for substance!
I particularly appreciate the fluidity of your dialogues. As a writer, I know how difficult it can be to depict conversations that don't sound stilted and artificial. The tempo is spot on.
Your description of the descent from Pelileo is especially well crafted, full of vivid visuals and other sensory cues. Loved it!