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in #life6 years ago

Rich rhymes are used as rhymes. on the edge of rich rhymes.
The poem, order and harmony of the mold according to written words and sentences. You can give the content of the poem.

Poetry was tried on the continent.
Di stacked; Photographics. Have you ever lost my arm? /
I sniffed and hugged me. The beaks of the birds did not open. /
And if he opens my heart, the window of his heart. "

Poetry is dominant. . makes an additional request to send an additional petition. The s, k, m dominance of consonants can be seen. Also the name of his beloved and his poem, the name of the poem of constantly explained why the poem was opened and why.

In fact, a sharp feeling in his poetry is felt. That's pessimism sweetheart
Our poet chose to call his girlfriend not with names but with emotions. We frequently use this use in our literature. With the name of your lover, the intensity of emotions is defined in a shorter way.

A simple and clear style in poetry. Sentences were expressed in intensity of emotion. Injured heart word of a wounded heart. Words are understandable and simple.