This response is purely from an editing perspective. I haven't yet finished it. You asked me to look so if I see something that pops out I'll tell you here so you can edit it and fix it.

Restricitng this discussion to Information War and corruption networks, I leave with with alternative explanations in these links:

With is there twice. (I do things like this too... I reread my own posts several times editing... then later read them again to see stuff I missed... so I do things like this too)

I may edit this several times so check back. I want to post it though so I can start a different reply about the actual article and it's content. Which is the part you asked me to do.