MY INFORMATION FINDING CHAMPIONSHIP - SEASON 1 : ROUND 21 ENTRY [the exposed nest]

in #informationfinding7 years ago (edited)

This is my entry for @apolymask Information Finding Championship - Season 1 : round 21 contest
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  1. Twenty First challenge starts now and is a poetry challenge.
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  • Poetry
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THE EXPOSED NEST


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You were forever finding some new play.

So when I saw you down on hands and knees
In the meadow, busy with the new-cut hay,
Trying, I thought, to set it up on end,

I went to show you how to make it stay,
If that was your idea, against the breeze,
And, if you asked me, even help pretend
To make it root again and grow afresh.

But ‘twas no make-believe with you to-day,
Nor was the grass itself your real concern,
Though I found your hand full of wilted fern,
Steel-bright June-grass, and blackening heads of clover.

‘Twas a nest full of young birds on the ground
The cutter-bar had just gone champing over
(Miraculously without tasting flesh)
And left defenseless to the heat and light.

You wanted to restore them to their right
Of something interposed between their sight
And too much world at once—could means be found.

The way the nest-full every time we stirred
Stood up to us as to a mother-bird
Whose coming home has been too long deferred,
Made me ask would the mother-bird return
And care for them in such a change of scene
And might our meddling make her more afraid.

That was a thing we could not wait to learn.

We saw the risk we took in doing good,
But dared not spare to do the best we could
Though harm should come of it; so built the screen
You had begun, and gave them back their shade.

All this to prove we cared. Why is there then
No more to tell? We turned to other things.

I haven’t any memory—have you?—
Of ever coming to the place again
To see if the birds lived the first night through,
And so at last to learn to use their wings.

THE END.


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In poetry,
@Kabeertijani

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Hey @kabeertijani, great post! I enjoyed your content. Keep up the good work! It's always nice to see good content here on Steemit! Cheers :)

@exxodus thanks for stopping by.
According to my friends Original content speaks when a reader sees one.
Good to know you loved my content

That was a really beautiful and touching poem. Definitely a really unique and interesting entry. Thanks for sharing! :)

@apolymask thanks for the contest. I'm new here and a wanderer on steemit, in hope I believe whenever I'm lost, you will always find me and show me the way... Lol
My next publication should be my introduceyourself post.

I'm glad you loved the poem.

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Thanks for using the wafrica tag! @wafrica can give just one upvote per day!

Nice job glad you accepted my invitation good luck in the round
Hope you can join the other rounds that are going on and will be in the future going on
Oh and heres the discord server https://discord.gg/BEzxgsE

Thanks for using the wafrica tag! @wafrica can give just one upvote per day!