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RE: A LETTER TO THE FIRST MAN WHO BROKE MY HEART.

in Steem Cameroon3 years ago

Wow! Your words are beautiful and powerful simultaneously. They took me on a journey to your dad leaving, how you felt, how you've coped and you survived. It is absolutely heart wrenching.

You have a beautiful way of manipulating words.

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 3 years ago (edited)

Thank you so much. I wrote this dedicating it to dads who abandon their kids. My friend told me her story which indpired me to write this. Was even thinking of doing a short movie of abt it. I am glad you like it.

 3 years ago 

Great inspiration then. One thing I love about is that it's genuine and sincere. I think the short movie is a great idea. You could even voice over the poetry while making a video about it.

 3 years ago 

True exactly what was on my mind. Thank you dear.

 3 years ago 

You're welcome