Greetings, I'm in charge of helping newcomers in Nigeria. You've made a beautiful post, but you can improve the quality of your diary game post by going through this. In this post, you'll see mistakes you need to correct when writing a diary game post.

https://steemit.com/newcomers-community/@bossj23/tutorial-for-newbies-what-makes-a-quality-diary-game-post-part-1

https://steemit.com/steem4nigeria/@bossj23/tutorial-for-newbies-what-makes-a-quality-diary-game-post-part-2

	Your title doesn't match with your first picture because we're seeing only a selfie of you.

You can improve, get your post featured as one of the best post of the week by applying the format in the links I dropped