I really enjoy reading your story. Really sounds interesting. In the story that i read it teaches me to be bold keep your heads up to Face the difficulties way of life. And also to be optimistic and engrossed, only then you can successfully escape the displeasure of life. Haha just like mastering the aerobics programs and the chase game. By making the story more interesting you used your self as an illustration to make it easy for us to follow up. Good luck in the contest @kidi40.