club75 | Weekly Contest, "Creating Short Story Week #9". | Haydarpaşa Ferry by @wagner32
Thank you for the nice contest organized by @adeljose. I participate in the competition with the following story. So let's start!
He came near me. Once again impressed me with her green eyes. Yes, love can be a few times more impressive.
I was about to speak when she covered my lips with her thin, delicate fingers. She leaned slowly in my ear and said she would love me wherever she was. Was it a gift or a farewell? I didn't understand. She looked at me with her beautiful green eyes that contain all the beauties of the world. And then he jumped off the ferry.
My heart was aching. If I say I love you, will you come back?
You can enter this competition here: Weekly Contest, "Creating Short Story Week #9". /Concurso Semanal, "Creando Microrrelato Semana #9".
I invite you: @subconsciousness @whyshy @justezgi @baycan @serap
Greetings my friend @wagner32
Touching story about the reunion of a couple that memories kept them together, and that last moment where whispering they swore not to forget each other.
Thank you for your entry to the contest.
Participant #2
Thank you for your review and valuable comment. :)
Para el amor no hay distancia amigo.
El amor es el punto de destrucción de las distancias. :)
Hikayen ve resim çok güzel başarılar dilerim 🙏
Desteğiniz için teşekkür ederim. :)
It was a beautiful story. 👍 Also, Haydarpasa has a great place for me. I used to come here continuously for 4 years when I was studying in high school.
I'm glad I contributed a little to reminiscing your memories. Thank you. :)
cok guzel bitmese iyiydi okumaya devam etmek isterdim 😊👍👏
Teşekkür ederim. Kurallar böyle. Yoksa daha uzununu yazardım. :)
it was a nice story, a successful narration, the ending with a question.. congratulations..
But now I am writing a criticism, if there is an aching heart left, you did not love her very much, because if you loved and she left, she would have ripped out your heart and taken it with her..😅
I like your perspective. Thank you for your critique. If I had you read the post before sharing it, I would definitely change the ending. :)
I noticed it when mine wasn't in place 😅