Just as I expected, a very classic and fascinating drawing. Your approach is very melo and calm and yet beautiful to behold, I love your light control and that star shape thing beneath the orange stick, it's just so nice at sight. However, your shadow and your orange has a thin line gap in between which is not so nice, going forward with your next attempt, you can always close the gap up, closing it makes the drawing appear even more solid. Observe my drawing below...