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RE: A human | Story to participate in #rashia-contest
@Abdt great story with a great lesson to be learned! :) good job
Could you make it an open end? A ending that could continue, where the readers wonder how it would go on.
The story is over after the last sentance, I am left with no questions or wondering what became of Sami.
There are still 4 hours left until the deadline. The way it is now, I can not use it as a valid entry to the contest. Sorry
No problem, it was enough for me. I can't edit it to more and more. would you like to read my other story Travel of dreams part1
Part 2
Note I am not asking to add them in contest. I know I am failed in contest. I am asking for reading only. Every advice on the story will be appreciated.
Thank you so much. I will gladly read it after i have taken the next step in the contest.
Sorry about failing in the contest... but the story is amazing! I understand you can't stretch the story infinitely