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RE: Investments as stress generators

in Project HOPE4 years ago

hi @josevas217

Perhaps you could try to make your sentences a bit shorter? Example:

Since last year I started making some investments in different areas related to cryptocurrencies, trading, and currently Blockchain-based games, I did not think they could have such a degree of profitability, in fact I must confess that I was always skeptical about the games, something that has now radically changed, but, beyond this that I have commented, so far, what I want to emphasize is the fact that being an investor has its particularities that if not carried in the best way can affect your physical and mental health.

It's quite difficult to read such a super-long sentences and you may be losing part of your audience.
(by the time I've reached end of the sentence - I wasn't sure any more how did it start and what is it that you're trying to say).

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I've really tried to read this post. But I need to give up. For that one particular reason. Almost every paragraph is like one long and over-structured sentence.

Cheers, Piotr

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Thank you very much @crypto.piotr for the annotation. It's true, the paragraphs are very long, I'm not used to do it, but this time I extended them. I will keep it in mind for later.
Good day to you, best regards.