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RE: SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid
Student Name: @sabbirakib
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [5.3/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided a detailed and engaging account of a real-life emergency during a football game, showing understanding of the importance of first response skills. | To strengthen this response, try to explain what specific first aid steps you might take now, based on your current knowledge, if you were in the same situation again. This reflection could deepen the insight you’ve shown. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 2 | Discussed each step of the DRABC protocol with good logical flow, showing a practical approach to managing the roadside accident scenario. | Although you followed the DRABC steps well, adding details about safety, like checking for other vehicles or bystanders before moving in, could enhance safety awareness and clarify what would be done in case of an emergency. Additionally, consider briefly describing how you would clear any obstruction from the airway and assess the patient’s breathing rate and pulse. Also, remember to ask someone from the public to call for an ambulance rather than calling yourself. | [Grade: 0.8] |
| Question 3 | Listed emergency numbers for Bangladesh, which will be helpful for readers. | Good job on listing key emergency numbers. For future improvement, include additional services (e.g., ambulance, national suicide prevention, fire emergency) for a more comprehensive list. Also, consider adding a small description about the services they provide. | [Grade: 0.8] |
| Question 4 | Submitted a visual representation of the DRABC protocol, effectively summarizing the steps in a creative way. | Although you created the illustration, it needs to provide more clarity. Consider using visuals to represent all the steps, and aim for a tidy presentation if creating it by hand, as this would make it easier to understand. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 5 | Completed the quiz accurately, demonstrating a good grasp of the lesson material. | Good work on the quiz. To improve understanding, review any questions you found challenging to ensure better accuracy on future quizzes. Seven out of ten questions were correct. | [Grade: 1.7] |
General Feedback:
Overall, you have a foundational understanding of first response protocols, and you demonstrated effort in following each step. Building on this by enhancing specific actions for each DRABC step and improving the clarity of visual aids will help strengthen your responses. Keep refining your skills, and continue to apply feedback as you progress.
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03
Thank you, Proffer for your review. It’s helped me a lot to understand what I left during my homework. I will keep up the good work in the next lesson.
0.00 SBD,
0.04 STEEM,
0.04 SP