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RE: SLC21/WK5: Choking and Airway Obstruction: A Complete Guide to Life-Saving First Aid Techniques
Student Name: @sbamsoneu
Overall grade: 5.9
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided what are the changes in a body that causes partial airway obstruction compared to complete airway obstruction. Good work. | A few details are missing such as some people have allergies to some food items. Also the information of physiological changes in the body during choking is missing. The information of lack of oxygen is also missing. | [Grade: 1.9] |
| Question 2 | demonstrated the Heimlich Maneuver | there are a few shortcomings in this question. Such as the number of thrusts for a Heimlich Maneuver are missing. The demonstration is not clear. | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency choking scenario. | You also haven't mentioned how to remove the obstruction if the patient has foreign object stuck in this throat. | [Grade: 2.2] |
| Question 4 | The student failed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 0] |
General Feedback: The student has shown an average understanding of this week's course. There were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1