Don't Disturbed

in Teachers & Students3 days ago (edited)

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Successfully snatching a toy from my younger brother, the sense of satisfaction led me to sleep

Without coercion from the mommy who felt upset and without having to count the jumps of the sheep

Don't ever try to slowly take that Ferrari, even if I'm in another dimension

If I wake up, and feel that it is no longer in my grasp, I can become a lion

Instead of regretting it, it's better you give him another toy dad, this morning, didn't he also take my Jeep?


I snatched the toy, satisfied I fell asleep

Mom, there's no need to force me, no jumping sheep

Guarding car from a nonsense

Lose grip, a lion's response

Dad, just buy something, little one stole my jeep!


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P.S. I posted this article in order to participate in learning task 3 in #wewrite about Limerick

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I snatched the toy satisfied I fell asleep (11)
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Guarding my car from nonsense (7)
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Just buy something dad for the thief of my jeep!(11)

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 2 days ago 

Nice, I'll have to try it again!

 2 days ago 

It's done!

Looks like there won't be a chance for a third time 😁

There's always a chance but you did it 👍

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 3 days ago 

Semoga sukses dengan kontes anda, aku mendoakan yang terbaik.

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