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RE: The Midnight Train || a five minute prompt

in CCC12 days ago

I was expecting some screams, and crows or vampires circling around. In the end, it was the midnight train. It was definitely suitable for hanging a couple of spider webs.
I liked what you wrote, although it could have been more. I was hoping you'd elaborate.

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 12 days ago (edited)

I know what you mean.
I get the vibe to add more words but I fear I may tamper with the main message and divert the attention of the reader. Reading long post can get boring at some point and the reader can get lost in the way.

That's why I prefer leaving it short and precise.