Welcome to the freeweiters.
This is a great start and fits into the prompt: weave daily events into a free verse poem.
What I like is if I read this you feel the rush, business of people like ants running around. The way you wrote it in one piece adds extra to this busy busy busy.
All you have to do is give it a good title!
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Okay, thanks alot , can I write more
You can write what you like it's a good practise. A super creative weekend.
thank you