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RE: Contest: A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words

in Freewriters12 days ago

She remembers having everything she wanted, his parents making every effort to satisfy his whims, whims that were increasingly demanding.

"his" in this part should be replaced by her.

That son is most likely not a teenager yet. It's like our phrase: Berouw komt na de zonde but honestly I doubt she regrets, she regrets she misses the luxury and being served but that is a different story.

The average child is hard to please amd teenagers see what they like to see.

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I believe that a child who treats his parents badly repents, I cannot imagine such a perverse person continuing his life as if nothing had happened.