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RE: Freestyle Poem: Life of a First Son

in Freewriters7 months ago

I am also the first child, and although I am female, I also had a lot of pressure on me.
My parents only wanted me to give it my all, and that I realized afterwards. I bought my first car myself, and my siblings each received a car. It only made me stronger.

I can guarantee you that one day this son will look back, understand, and say... Thank you!

Nice poem!

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Oh wow you are also the first child that's incredible, first child always get special blessings from God as long as they keep on living s good life.

Is good you bought your first card yourself, I love that.

Nice poem!

Thank you, I was just thinking of few things and the thought of writing a pork came to my mind.