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RE: The Rabbit Siren

in Freewriters4 years ago

Oh my goodness this is lovely. I see a father and child. A father who tolerated bunnies because his daughter squealed with such delight. Now, she's gone - doesn;t even send postcards! - but the love is still present because the bunnies are still there.

I mean, it's so YOU.

Wonderful tale of mixed feelings. Magical.

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I worry my writing is so me. I try to step out of me and look what happens - I write me! Well, there were bunnies outside the window... I did quite like how the siren of the prompt became her squeal as soon as I pictured her.

Thanks sooooo much!

All of my writing is me too. Nothing wrong with that! We show ourselves to others, and they know us. We connect.