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RE: The most genuine way of loving / La forma más genuina de amar
Dear Free Writer,
We continue our #wewrite journey with our last lesson an introduction to poetry. We hope you had fun. Don't forget to read your comments, they can be very useful. Below you find the review of your publication which is part of We-Write-Lesson 6.
| Criteria | Result |
|---|---|
| What went well - 1 point | 1 |
| What to improve | |
| Misunderstanding | |
| Title - 2 point | 2 |
| Hashtags - 1 points | 1 |
| A flashy start - 2 points | 2 |
| Creativity / out-of-the-box thinking - 3 points | 2 |
| Original/no AI text | 👍 |
| Following the rules - 1 point | 1 |
| Total max 10 points | 9 |
| Verification date: | October 20, 2024 |
Poetry: Lyric
Remark: La amistad es la forma más genuina de amar, el amigo no juzga, no reprocha, se complace en acompañar, apoyar, animar, consolar.
El poema es una prosa en la que expresas el concepto de amistad, solo te sugeriría agregar más emociones, lo que sientes de forma particular, más describir esas emociones que conceptualizar, de eso se trata la poesía. Hiciste un buen trabajo igualmente.