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RE: Freewrite House #pic1000 Contest – Journey Into the Unknown

in Freewriters18 days ago

This is a good story. It makes me wonder how hard her life was that she felt the need to escape with a hot air balloon. Nothing so bad as never bring able to hear your own thoughts, voice, heartbeat.

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Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! 🌟
Yes, the idea of escaping in a hot air balloon symbolizes how desperately she longed for peace and silence — a moment to reconnect with herself. Sometimes, the noise of the world becomes louder than our own heartbeat, and all we want is to rise above it, even just for a little while.
I'm really glad the story made you reflect — that means a lot to me!