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RE: Hot Day In My Life

in Freewriters22 hours ago

Hi @mathan03,
Welcome to Steemit and welcome to the freewriters.
I am a bit confused about your text. At times it seems you talk about yourself while you also mention 'he' as if you are talking about someone else

I am not so sure why guests make you sweat and where you saw them but if it comes to freewriting this makes a good one.