For some reason I thought as the danced, he looks in pain, and you wrote that it was getting dark it would start to rain!
There waa no need to write that last sentence, the story has a lot to offer.
Hashtags: Pay attention. Only use hashtags that fit to your content!
This in not about #retrogames. The hashtag contest should only used if you host a contest.
Note: using the wrong hashtags is hashtags abuse! Please, edit and remove them.
Thanks for the nice comment. I know what you are saying.. I don't know why at some point of writing I was thinking that the ending would be that they go back inside.. LOL
Alright, I thought that you needed all the hashtags on your post to be there, not only the relevant ones.. I fixed them now.