I've been reading your writing for a while. You have talent, but I think the fear of the blank page keeps you writing little stories. They're not bad. But I'd like to see your full potential in a two-page story.
This story is well done. Especially because it's fluid, visual and you gave it a three hundred and sixty degree twist in the resolution of the plot. That's great. I'm not one for letting the reader know from the first paragraph what's going to happen. Keep writing.
Thanks for the feedback.
I do mostly short stories because these days the attention span of most people is not long. They are easily distracted when reading something long, most of them just want to get to the good stuff.
Which is why I write them long once in a while.
It's true the attention spam is short and everyone is multitasking, still we may expect from this platform, especially the free writers, they like to read.
A good weekend!
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Thanks. Sure
Writing very short stories, 50 words or 140 characters and so on, we frequently did on Steemit. It's far from easy. The same counts for writing for 5 minutes without a break.
No one joining the 2 #we-write courses was able to do it.
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