Fractures. Strange nudity
The story is longer. I think it's enough for a book.
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Art Explained by a Writer: Melancholy (1895)
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A madman should not be mad if his madness is to dream. At least that was written on some tombstone. I disagree with some concepts. Nudity is good. It takes you by surprise, but after the conventional five minutes everything flows naturally. I've been called dark. I had that one coming. I've been called untalented. I also accept it as long as the knife comes out of your bag and can be used in a plastic bag. It is necessary to eat. Not so much painting. I can still use these colors as the metamorphosis of a nasty insect. The strokes don't take me out of my comfort zone, which isn't all that good considering it's 12:07 a.m. I can write verses. Hate. Marry the muse of erotic poetry. And even measure at odd times the sound waves produced by these pelicans that dive to fish. Desperation causes our facial muscles to fail us. As would be your smile. I tell you. I've gone down to the basement. This fat fool is still breathing.
The stench was unbearable. Flies had created their nest in that realm. The shadow was their abode. The skin was purplish. There were more cuts on his skin than you described. On occasion he was able to cough. To shoo away a little of the flies that formed a dense rain cape. The potatoes were a putrid, nauseating lab fluid.
Under the table I found strange traces. The cat was pressed against you. It's possible he scratched your face. Did you try to cut him into pieces? Did you go out to sell bottles to eat? Or are you with those idiots you turned down at some party?
Hopefully no sex, nudity, drugs and rock and roll.
I've been thinking about outdoor sex - are you sure you can't have it in the snow? Have you seen how these kids bathe in frozen lakes? I found old Midas' shoe. Is it missing?
I can dredge the whole river and collect every bottle. Make the perishable enlighten me. Let's take the boat. We have coins. This petty boatman, dealer in souls. He just needs coins. Have you seen the sea? My children have not. So I'll show you what's simple. I can show you a gun. But I should shoot. Maybe force you into existence.
Fragment... to be continued
Trataré de armar este relato: Hay un pintor que vive cerca del mar. Él trata de pintar 999 pelícanos; pero no lo hace con un pincel, sino con un machete. ¿sobre qué lienzo pinta? ¿Los pelícanos están teñidos de rojo?
El ambiente parece asqueroso. Cerca del mar hay muchas moscas, sobre todo cuando hay pescado descompuesto o cuando va a llover.
¿Hay una mujer o un cadáver debajo de la mesa? ¿Contra quién se apretó el gato?
¿El narrador es un enfermo mental o una persona que se imagina situaciones que no ocurren en realidad?
No sé si el narrador logró pintar pelícanos, pero el escritor dejó mi cabeza hecha un desastre. Trataré de dejar todo cómo está, pues puedo caer en un laberinto de ideas, y eso normalmente conduce a la locura, jeje.
You have given me new ideas for this story. The amazing thing is the interpretation you give it, it's great. It's that you're just reading a fragment of something bigger. You can't imagine the whole framework. It also references things that @wakeupkitty and I wrote. Independent chapters, but they intertwine. Telling the life of someone abused and making strange decisions. Part of the story happens only in his head, when he's delirious or when he's at least trying to sleep under the table.
https://steemit.com/freewriters/@wakeupkitty.pal/4rpb2z-art-explained-by-a-writer-melancholy-1895
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Jajaja. Esta es una narrativa postmoderna. Cada escritor transita un sendero, pero luego, todas las historias confluyen en una sola, con la misma coherencia de las aguas de distintos ríos que van a parar en el mar.
Un abrazo, mi apreciado amigo.
I have discovered that you have a great talent for poetry. Romantic and subtle. Very fresh and visual language. Although I don't know why you want to stay away from eroticism. It is part of the essence of being and feeling. Eros assists us. or how else could you write so great?
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Temo caer en el lugar común en lo que respecta a la poesía erótica, aunque creo que en esta oportunidad me salvé de hacerlo, jeje. Gracias por pasar y dejarme este cálido comentario.
The woman is alive and suddenly it turns out that the old guy in the basement covered by rotten potatoes coughs. I could swear I cut him in pieces or did I only cut of his finger to try out the knife not that that was needed?
The sex in the snow is clear but those pelicans? Did some god stop by and did you drink again @almaguer? Let me open the bottle.... (not the wine but the one with the message the escaped person has while staying at Mother Holle...
Está muy interesante este diálogo entre escritores, esa es otra novela paralela a la que ya cada uno escribe, jeje.
The multiculturality of rivers and stories that bifurcate in each new creation. The sea. So much to tell. Everything should be seen in a positive light. And we should also be more active in chatting and leaving our ideas, at last, we have a lot of affinity, we like many things equally and it has always been good motivation and equal criticism.
I use Telegram a lot. almaguer018, so when you feel the compelling need to say hello to an old, new acquaintance, the pleasure and pleasure will be mine.
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Te buscaré en telegram para compartir ideas. Un abrazo.
We'll see where the story ends LOL
Creo que han encontrado a una detective que tratará de armar las historias que se bifurcan.
In the infinite lie of our characters, some of them have to lose. But we always bring out the best in each new talk. It allows us to create and be alert or what we will tell next, I think it's a good combination of scenes and characters. Damn where did so many pelicans come from! But I see them flitting around and smearing the whole landscape.
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I didn't figure it out yet but if you ask me they landed at the wrong place. We can blame Dylan. He paints too much.
I drink little and usually water. I've had to settle accounts with so many pelicans hanging around. I haven't forgotten that I drew my gun and haven't fired yet. At least I've given you directions so you don't die. The guy was still whiny. So, other than being tied up, not drinking anything, not feeding. are you sure you cut something off? Or are you just still petting the cat under the table?
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Here I am....
The Ice Queen, don't touch my cat!
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