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Greetings, @akmalshakir , Thank you for being a part steemit challenge season 24, we present your assessment

Your story was quite good. Here you have completed the contest with a heartbreaking story. Where two people were in a relationship, the boy stopped communicating with the girl for his own personal reasons and stopped talking to her on the phone without telling her anything. This created a distance between them and at one point, their relationship ended. It was a very tragic incident, but it is certainly true and something to realize. No relationship can ever survive if the truth is kept secret and through death.

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