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RE: The Diary Game||16||05||2025||Friday is a favorite day.

in STEEM FOR BETTERLIFE21 days ago

High dear, you did a lot at one single day. I like the picture of the seedling, goat and the brothers.

You have so much to share and it would make a better read if you make a story out of it and glue some sentence together. Kind of how people speak if they are among friends.
This is more like you list everything.

I went...
I went..
I made..
I put...

You can add somevquestions like: Ever saw a baby goat? I met one at my uncle's far, it's a...

I wish you a great and happy week!

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