RE: Lifestyle the diary game || blessed activities in the month of ramadan
Let's say you are rather new and I wonder if you have a mentor.
Your diary is not very attractive and I am sure you can do way better.
Is there a reason you use such an unattractive long title since you also repeat it all in the text?
I suggest you to add better, more colourful and some artistic photos. You can for example also take a close up or use the photo editor in your phone.
Hashtag abuse! This is NOT creativewriting!
I have some questions:
Can you tell me how many read you, how good your diaries are rewarded and if you learned something by writing these diaries day after day?
Will you ever understand how hashtags work and how to use them in the right way?
Would you pay for what you just wrote?
If you have to rate yourself from 1-10 (10 is the highest grade) what would the grade be you give to this diary?
I am a newcomer here, and I often read posts from other friends in the community, so I follow their way of making posts, although it can be said to be wrong, but the problem of mentors, I don't have one yet, because around where I live there are very few people playing steemit, especially mothers, instead many of them play tiktok, so I struggle a little in learning about making posts on steemit. with corrections like this I am very grateful, because it can add new knowledge for me, God willing, in the future I will improve my way of making posts, both in writing and in uploading photos, I will try to edit the photos first so that they are not blurry, before I upload them here. and I have fixed the title. thank you for your guidance.