Oh wow.., first of all..thanks for sharing your story...it was interesting to read about your family story and all the early years.
However i think your storyline is so fitting for that contest, but most importantly, it has passed a message.
I appreciate the suspends at the end of the story......i couldnt hold on than to ask you now....Who died?
I guess thats gonna be the part two of the story...Great Job!!
Thank you so much for your appreciative comment.
The most important thing for me is to write an interesting story and captivate readers. If you say that this is successful (it doesn't matter if it's for a contest or not), then I believe you and I'm happy.... :-))
Okay, passing a message end fulfilling a good storyline is important, too... ;-)
Haha, no, there won't be a second part of this story.
Well, maybe I could write a bit more about my ancestors in former times. Maybe I should before I forget a lot: There is no one left to ask.
So to answer your question: A former colleague who retired just eight years ago has died. We liked her very much.
You are most welcome Ma. As for writing an interesting publication to catch readers interest, i think you have done that...because you just caught one.....ME.
Oops.., i thought there was gonna be part two...
Its okay..., maybe we can figure out part two individually 😊.
That was an interesting publication.