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RE: "SLC21/WK5: Choking and Airway Obstruction: A Complete Guide to Life-Saving First Aid Techniques "
Student Name: @xkool26
Overall grade: 9.1
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided what are the changes in a body that causes partial airway obstruction compared to complete airway obstruction. Excellent You're the first user to properly explain what happens inside the body. The point of the introduction of a foreign body in the respiratory tract instead of the esophagus is what I had been looking for in other assignments well done. The mention of larynx and pharynx was also very well put. | A few details are missing such as some people have allergies to some food items. This information would have been nice. | [Grade: 2.4] |
| Question 2 | Outlined the approach of performing a Heimlich maneuver. Excellent work and demonstration. | You didn't mention the number of thrusts | [Grade: 2.3] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency choking scenario. Good explanation | You have some clear shortcomings in this question. Reread it and you'll find them. You pick one person from the bystanders and authorize him/her to call the ambulance. You also haven't mentioned how to remove the obstruction if the patient has foreign object stuck in this throat. The number of compressions are also missing | [Grade: 1.9] |
| Question 4 | The student managed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. Excellent work with that. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback: The student has shown an excellent understanding of this week's course. I enjoyed reading this post but there were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts. Good work
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1