You, Me
I awake to a bittersweet feeling
Of you and your power over me
The guard on my mind is falling apart
The walls around my heart are crumbling slowly
You do things to me that I cannot explain
Lovely sensation that tickles and curls the toe
Causing me to lose track of time
Restless is now my second name
While I wait and watch for you
Hoping only for a glimpse
Day and night you invade my dreams
Thoughts of you keep me awake
Of things we can do together
And the things I want to do to you
I’m torn between the choices I have to make
Whether to let you go or hold you tight
But I'm unable to choose
I cannot resist you no matter how hard I try
You’ve owned me completely
I love it even when I hate it
Without you, I’m lost
Without your touch, I’m nothing
My memory is a mess when it comes to you
You always creep up to me
Snuggling in at odd times
Bringing smiles to my trembling lips
I never wanted you in the beginning
I loved staring at nature and enjoying the quietude it brings
Till you came along and changed everything
I don’t regret a single moment spent in your arms
I need you so much I can taste it
I can’t breathe till I hear your voice
The so familiar goofy tone
Soothing the aches around my heart
It’s become a sweet pain
As normal as oxygen
Itching yet pleasurable
I throb with desire for you
Only your flavour can quench this hunger
Don’t make me wait forever
A free verse sweet poem isn't such a bad idea after all, wouldn't you agree? Tell me your thoughts.
What a beautiful passionate poem!
Thank you.
I need a cold shower @chinyerevivian, such a beautiful piece. 💕
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Thank you. This is deeply appreciated.
Fanning myself to oblivion. Words have immense weight and yours carry souls over the casual need and want to something else. I loved this ♡
I'm glad 💜
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I love every piece of this writing.
Am a big fan of emotions, love and sensation. You got every lines so well written in the right places.
Poetry has a way of invading the writer's heart and mind.
I can't just keep off, I think I need to follow you up
Keep the pen rolling and steem on.! @chinyerevivian
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Haha. Thanks. Followed back.
What a painfully sweet poem! I think we have all had those feelings where just the touch of a hand sends your head into a complete tailspin, which pales in comparison to the touch of a lover. I can almost feel the desperation you write of.
Haha. We've all been there. Thanks for stopping by.
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This was SO beautiful! And just as I said in my post earlier... poetry is all over my "world" at the moment... something must be going on within me... lol
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Thank you. Poetry has a way of sneaking up to you.
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Yes! It certainly has done that to me a lot haha! And it is my pleasure.
Nice lines of peom and heart touching ones. Love and affection are wonderful things if you caught up with the real one. I hope he comes back again with a flower.
Stay creative...
Steem on.
This is PHC.
Thank you.
I can sense the immense love, the longing, the anxiety, the desperation, and all the feelings in between. This is such a beautiful poetry, with so much passion!
Thank you for sharing your talent to us. Keep on writing, as it touches the core of me, and I believe, with others as well. ❤❤
Thank you for reading.
The pain is actually included in the package, @chinyerevivian. Point of entry is the only unknown element. But it sure can be used for poems… :)
I completely agree. Thanks for stopping by.