My new Poem - The Earth We Lived by @davidfar

in Writing & Reviews3 years ago (edited)

It is late night here, and I was in the mood of writing, I know that some of you my friends know that sometimes I write poems,so tonight I decided to write a new poem in the moment.

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We wake up with light, the light of the sun

The only star that was a close friend with us

We step on the ground, the old place we born

The ancient lands we lived, still filled with life

Cultures they made, our ancestors from past

In wars and in peace, the story still exist

In the moment we see, we didnt expect to be

To be like the past, the story wont last

Discovering still, cause it's not the end

Our beliefs could be wrong, yet we might been descend

We made it so hard, to connecting our minds

With rules that we made, limited our own minds

I was wishing once, that we could be friends

A world full of love, in peace and with trust.

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I hope you guys have a good day or night wherevee you are living my friends!

Regards,

@davidfar

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Hermoso poema amigo David. La última foto está impresionante. Saludos

Muchas gracias mi buena amiga, tu comentario me hizo feliz.

The complexity of this poem has made me understand, respect and love poetry more, thank you @davidfar

Thank you so much man :)

 3 years ago 

Hello friend @davidfar, it is a wonderful poem, history is a part of the past but it does not define us, and we are the ones who trace this path.

Beautiful photographs.

Thank you my friend, your kind comment means much to me. 💯🙏