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RE: Publish or Perish || poem

in Writing & Reviews4 years ago

Beautiful poem and well written.

Butter and milk
Sugar and dough
You would call it
Balderdash? Till
It's aroma zooms
From the oven
Then new lease of life
New strength and sense

This part made me remember mum's cook😋. Bread and beans😅🤣